Goldilocks and The Three Martians

My dad was over watching our two daughters (5 and 2) last week, and while together, they decided to write a story.  This story is worth sharing!  Take a break every once in a while. It will keep your head from exploding.

GOLDILOCKS AND THE THREE MARTIANS

Once upon a time, there was a girl named Goldilocks. She lived with her mother who was very bossy. (?) She leaves her house with her secret key. It was the key to her rocketship.  And she was leaving for Mars. She has packed her space suit, her cat, dog, and hamster. Her dog Ruff-Ruff, her cat Maurice, Harry Hamster, and Goldilocks blasted off into space.

Goldilocks met three mean Martians. They are grumpy because they never take naps and only eat peas. Goldilocks made Martian soup but they didn’t like it.  And they threw it at Goldilocks. It was very hot soup but her space suit saved her.  THE END.

Not bad for a 5 year old!

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  • http://www.marisabirns.com/ Marisa Birns

    It's very good for a five-year-old!

    Not taking naps and only eating peas will make anyone grumpy after a while. But they were very rude to throw the soup at Goldilocks after she took the time to cook it!

  • http://www.thebasemententrepreneur.com/ Chris Reimer

    I just wanna know why the cat was named “Maurice”

  • ladyumbrella

    I think I can see a t-shirt design in the story hehe…oh to have the imagination of a 5 year old again..